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Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Nephy "Lifebeat" Nephrahim on Feb 8, 2007, 1:39am

Title: Die a little.

Cover Description: A boy is seen lying down on a hospital bed, looking forward. A girl's back is seen. She is walking toward the boy, holding a tray with Soup in her hands. Most of her backside is hidden by long, bright red hair.

Credits: Sam Drugbringer

Scene: Hospital.

Boy: “Ha-ha, You look good in a nurse uniform.”

Girl: “I'm not IN a nurse's uniform, nice try though.”
She sits down in the seat next to him.
“You're looking good. I guess its working.”

“I hope so. After all these weird tests, they had better do something. Hey, is that food?”

“The nurse let me take it in. It seemed like a nice thing to do.”

“You're a terrible liar. They'd never let you take it in. What if you poisoned it?”

“I'm not lying! They did let me take it in! You just don't believe anybody.”

“For a reason. Nobody believes anything I say.”

“Because you always LIE. Now stop talking so I can help you.”
She sets the tray down and attempts to feed him.

“Hey! Stop it! I can feed myself.”
He struggles for a few seconds, but is easily overpowered by the girl. She looks at him with concern.

“See? You're still weak. Now lie down and let me help.”
She begins feeding him.

“…What do you think is wrong with me?”

“I don't know.”

White text box: That's not true dear.

Red text box: It was at the time. I didn't know what was going on.

White text box: Really? Are you quite sure? I could check for you.

Red text box: P-please don't. It's just what I said, and I DID say it.

White text box : Hmm. If you say so dear. Continue.

Boy: “But… They'll figure it out right? And cure it?”

Girl: “I'm sure they will. You'll be out of here in no time.”
She stands up.

“You're leaving?”

“Get better. Then you'll get more time then in-between school and homework. “

“So…. I'll see you at school?”
He grins mischievously

“Prrrrroboly a little before that.”
She leans down and kisses him on the cheek.

Cut to Nephy and Emma Frost sitting face to face in the mansion.

Emma: “And that was it?”

Nephy: “Y-yes… That was the last time I saw him.”

“Don't stutter darling, it's unbecoming. He did survive, right?”

“Yes… He just got better after a while. I don't think the Doctors did anything.”

“But you never saw him again?”

“No. My parents decided to move right around the time he was admitted into the hospital.”

“And what did they say was wrong with him?”

“He had a… Blood condition. Sickle Cell Anemia.”

“I'm getting bored with this. I’ll start asking the hard questions soon…”

“H-he didn't have the genetic condition. For some reason his cells were just bending out of shape, but my powers don't work like that!”

“What makes you think that? I'd say bending blood cells is exactly what you can do.”

“No! I can't affect things I can't see, and I've never seen his blood or anything.”

“You can't see your own blood darling, think of a better excuse.”

“It doesn’t work like that! Besides, it can’t work subconsciously. Even if I wanted to hurt him, I could never do it without knowing…”

“That's true enough. So the real question is, did you know?”

“I didn't! I couldn’t! I would never!”

“I could tell you, of course, but that's not the point. However, I cannot allow this to happen to the other students here. You will have to be very careful about how you spend your time. This will not happen again, is that clear?”

“Yes Miss Frost. It is.”

“Good. I will be keeping an eye on this.”
Emma begins standing, but sits down again.
“I am sorry, but I do think you are correct about your powers Lisa. Because that is true, you can change it. See that you do, for your own sake.”

Nephy is seen quietly sobbing as Miss Frost exits the room.

Editor’s note:

Yes, I know, Angst. You have my word however, this will not be happening to anybody any time soon, so don’t even think about it. It’s just a story to get to know her better. And she won’t be crying about it every night or anything either.

And please be kind. I don't do this that often.


Re: Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Dillon Drummond on Feb 8, 2007, 1:51am

Interesting. It's nice to get a little more background on my favorite new Hellion (that's right, I said it!)

Feel bad for her though, Emma's such a bitch


Re: Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Nephy "Lifebeat" Nephrahim on Feb 8, 2007, 2:10am

She should be, I have the combined post total of the rest of them (well, except Cadmus, but he had 600 posts when created)

And the best part is, you could be referring to ANY New Hellion, since they're ALL getting a comic. That's why it's 1 out of 4!


Re: Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Protoman on Feb 8, 2007, 7:39am

Kalvin only has so little because I used this account for my original Hellion.


Re: Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Marisol Morales on Feb 8, 2007, 8:51am

I liked the idea of it, but I think the prose itself could have been better. As it stands, it's mostly dialogue.


Re: Hellions: Next Gen 1 of 4
Post by Nephy "Lifebeat" Nephrahim on Feb 8, 2007, 9:20am

Yeah, I had this idea a while ago, but when writing it, I found it was all diolauge, and didn't want to force anything into it. The next one should be meatier, since it's probably got a fight and a main character that loves to be a jerk.

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